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I choose not to be you -
(my heart now full of pain)

I choose not to be you -
(must I endure again?)

I choose not to be you,
For you and me - the same.
And thus, no choice to be -
(You lie upon my pain)

But be myself again.
(For you I die, again)
I try not to be (weak?! HA!
I weep, emotions fleeing
)

I try -
(you fail at seeing)
I try -
(you fail at BEING -
Human
)
Do you mean
To leave me all alone?
©2008-2009 ~Sober-Irish-Guy
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Hmm... the format could use some indentations. I'll edit when I remember the &snp code for them.

This one is a bit odd. I had the idea of a soliloquy while another spoke, like an internal monologue while you hear the outside too.

And it was none too happy. But that's just what happens when communication breaks down.
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It made me sad...but I love it. Is that what you were going for? lol

--
What would Jesus do...for a Klondike Bar?
It ended up being pretty depressing... and that was probably what I was going for.

The lovelyness is just innate to my poetry... I hope. :P

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